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| Flames from the Shadow Realm, Arise! | |
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Kami
| Subject: Flames from the Shadow Realm, Arise! Sat Mar 20, 2010 10:28 am | |
| Basic InformationName: Sanada "Izanagi" Minamimoto Yukimura Age: 1,220. Gender: Male. Division: None. Looks: Rank Former Captain of Squad 3. Background and PersonalityHistoryBorn in a small town near Iwagakure. First child of Former ANBU Captain, Kotoamatsukami and Former Jounin, Amenominakaushi. He was the first child and the first male aswell, giving him the name of the shinto religion's kami, Izanagi. Izanagi, the hybrid son of a Kouseitan'i and Nara. Izanagi is a sweet and nice guy as a two month child. Being the first child he got much attention and many gifts, but as he grew up, to the point of age three. His life turned around dramatically. He was given more responsibility. He was small and young, fragile but intellegent beyond any standards. A complete strategist. He helped his father during his time as a ANBU captain by making strategies to help his squad take on many opponents. Slowly, he and his father and mother created a huge bond, until, his younger brother came into the picture. Susanoo, the wild and crazy one of the family. Even as a new born he was more uncontrollable than Izanagi was. Izanagi took care of his younger brother, training with his father and mother aswell. Izanagi is the first heir to the Legacy his father will bestow upon his children, which is where Izanagi got his first nickname. Legacy however, took his words into great consideration training himself to no end, no resting or anything. It's just straight on training. Izanagi then one day woke from a heavenly slumber one night to hear his parents bickering over adultery terms in which He did not make clear. The next morning. His father had a smile on his face but in his eyes, his eyes was filled with misery. As if he was enduced with depression that it was clouding his thinking process. Kotoamatsukami declared his loyal and former retired ANBU team to escort his children to many different villages to train harder, leaving his oldest son with the sword known as Shin'en. Shin'en was the sword that took the form and shape of many different things such as different weapons he used in training. Sadly, he and his younger brother had to separate and go different locations for different training. Izanagi went to Kumogakure but while on the move, he encountered a very long conversationaly training with first non relative master, Jikimaru, the man who also helped Izanagi's father in various different missions together during their time serving Iwagakure and friendship. Izanagi and Jikimaru did a process called Training Race in which they would fight each other on their way to their destination. No stopping, were the rules. This improved Izanagi's training in leg power and speed intensely. One they reached the area. Kumogakure was over populated with ninja of the lightning affinity which Izanagi is embedded with but never really used on purpose. Here is where he will learn to better handle it and train with the best of it's lightning abilities. Jikimaru and the Former Raikage were brothers, who does each other favors at the time. Jikimaru gladly offered the Raikage a deal of using the village of Kumogakure to train the child of a best friend and he will repay this favor with one of his own which is still unclear to Izanagi since thats all he heard before leaving to the underground training grounds by the ANBU. Izanagi mostly used his other kind of kekkei genkai ability in most of his training. A young master of shadows is what his father refers to him as in training battle. Being surrounded by top of the notch ANBU of Kumogakure, Izanagi wasn't even afraid. Instead he was excited, which interested the ANBU. He then trained with the ANBU, learning new lightning based techniques and combinational moves. While back at home, five years later, father and mother created another child. Her name was Amaterasu. She and father trained aswell along with her mom. THey trained for two years before having another child and sending Amaterasu off to train in another village, Amaterasu went to Konohagakure. Uzumu was the new child. Just as a baby, Kotoamatsukami and Amenominakanushi had another huge arguement. Only to find out that Ame' caught a very nasty disease that she passed on to her lover. Who was devastated to find out that the cause of the disease was because of Ame, cheating in the relationship they had. Ame' left the household, leaving Koto' to face a dying situation in which he may never get out of. Ontop of that, he lost the love of his life, he may never have another shot at love again with a disease thats ending his life as of now. Living at home with a newborn child in his arms and anger in his eyes, despair in his heart and hate on the mind. Hope knocked on the door, it was a beautiful lady and her 7 year old child. Love struck the both of them. Starting a new loving household without the other children knowing as of yet. While back in Kumogakure, the age of Izanagi emerged from five to eleven years of age. One more day until he was twelve years of age and he can be free to travel wherever he wishes. He sat in his rented room in a bed next to Jikimaru, as he hears a knock on the door, The raikage was the person he saw after he answered the door. The raikage offered the young child who was trained by Anbu to be trained by the Raikage himself. Becoming a sannin of Kumogakure although he's not officially a ninja. Izanagi accepted the offer of being trained by him but didn't like the fact of being tied down to only one village. The next morning after training all night with the Raikage. The Raikage challenged the boy to a official battle. The rules were, if Izanagi won the battle, he would gain the sword known as Urahara, which was the true secret to the Raikage's power. Izanagi drew his Shin'en and got ready into a battle stance. They charged at each other with great intensity, battling with the very same speed as lightning itself. Two lightning users, enhanced from head to toe and equipped with top notched weaponry went at it for quite some time before the Raikage showed why he was chosen to lead the village. He preformed handseals and created a Lightning concentrated bomb when released explodes and shoots lightning within a 20 feet radius, gladly they was fightning in the large training grounds. Izanagi, using that intellegent brain of his, used his body as a conductor and absorbed the lightning bomb as it converted into chakra. Leaving the Raikage chakraless. Izanagi won by default, the raikage, having no choice but to give the child the Urahara and taught him how to use it. Raikage explained how to use it by giving him an example, first he meditated and chanted a few words while preformed handseals in a funny looking sitting position. Izanagi bowed in graditude and left Kumogakure in hopes of returning to Jikimaru and the fellow good people of Kumogakure. Now, Izanagi set off, going back home but of course taking a few detours before reaching his destination. Izanagi, at the age of thirteen stopped by Otogakure. While in Otogakure he discovered a place in Otogakure inside of a vacant cave in which he started to sit in the same sitting position he pictured the Raikage doing. He chanted a few words and preformed handseals accordingly and the blade rose above in the sky, putting Izanagi in the mind set of training in a world where heaven is in the sky and hell is on earth, a combination of which he can train in a place of Heaven and Hell, speeding up time in which he could train. Izanagi then trained both of his Kekkei Genkais to mastery level. Wondering if he can train another element instead of just lightning. He never tried it, he only wondered. In the real world, Izanagi has been training for five years but in the world of Urahara, he has been training for double the years. meaning he has been training for ten years in total. Izanagi then learned in the world of Urahara, he can change the number of time that he can train, but never learned how to do it. Finally, he left the world of Urahara and came back to the real world, in search for other weapons with amazing abilities like Shin'en and Urahara. Izanagi, leaving Otogakure and on his way to Takigakure came across a few rouge ninja that were causing large amounts of danger and trouble. He trained so well that he and his shadow are in sync with one another when he was fusing his jutsu with both of his Kekkei Genkai's abilities. Izanagi made swift work of the troublemakers. Beating them without moving because he used his new jutsu, Kagemasurao which made quick work of them. Izanagi found that one of the beatened to death ninja carried a sword. The sword was labeled 'Ookamimottehane' on the left side of the blade in italics. Izanagi smirked and of ocursedon his way to Takigakure, mastered it by killing a few troublemakers along the way. Once he reached Takigakure. His Shadow began to talk to him, teaching him about the the shadow realm and how to reach the the shadow realm from the comfort of his own body. Izanagi only had to concentrate his shadow release to unbelievable standards, He would preform a single handseal and concentrate to new levels, then he will sink into his shadow, his shadow acting like a portal that takes him to the shadow realm in which he learns the jutsu of his Nara half and other shadow and darkness release users who had reached this level. To indicate that he has emerged in the shadow realm, he must get branded with the flames of the shadow realm. His shadow appears a reversed version of himself in personality, burned him with the flames of the shadow realm. The burn is located on his left hand, rising up just above his wrist. With this, Izanagi can use shadow enduced Lightning out of his left hand. The more he enters the shadow realm the more the shadow flames. He trained with his shadow self in the shadow world in the world of Urahara aswell for five additional years making it another ten years of training he had done, enhancing himself and his shadow. training their Kekkei Genkai and weapons and jutsu. After the great and intense training he had gotten for another five/ten years. He and his shadow are the closets then anyone else was or could me, seeing as the shadow self is actually himself. All his weapons were in top notch condition, in search of a new weapon and his collection would be complete. He walked towards Iwagakure, Jikimaru who was there on his way to visit Koto'. They met up to have one more fight, for the sacred sword that Jikimaru and the others in the ABNU squad help create. With four different Kinjutsu abilities embedded within it. The eighteen, soon to be nineteen Izanagi smirked and rushed towards Jikimaru who didn't go easy on Izanagi, giving him the battle of his eighteenth year. Jikimaru pulled out all his tricks. The battle went on, It was a huge endurance test, the fight went on for a complete week, None stop, the fight ended on Izanagi's nineteenth birthday. WHen Izanagi then used his forbidden Jutsu he learned in the Shadow Realm, called Kagerairyuu which he accidently used out of rage, hitting and killing Jikimaru on completely accident. He strolled over to his dead body and picked it up. Sad and feeling pathetic for killing one of his best friends. He feels the pain of losing someone close to him. Cryingover his dead body, he used the Amatsukami blade that Jikimaru used in battle, the blade Izanagi so desperately desired and peirced the body of Jikimaru. Enducing his shadow release to transfer his shadow into the lifeless body of Jikimaru. To make sure that Jikimaru didn't die, his personality is still the same by the way Izanagi remembers. Learning that he can use his shadow release to disguise the appearence of himself and others like shadow illusion type technique that only requires chakra control. The rest of the years they stayed away from home, traveling together. Izanagi reached the highest level of achievement in the ninja rank when he killed Kagaura Tenshinchigi atleast. Kagura Tenshinchigi was the God and Devil of the ninja world at the time. Started off small and rose up dominating the countries but when all else failed. Izanagi's relatives left him to kill this menace. Even though the evil within Kagura was so great. The outside appearance was peaceful but the evil at first sight Izanagi didn't get fooled by the peaceful appearance, Kagura presented himself with. He attacked brutally for the people and defeated, also killed Kagura but all the power and energy he used left him open for Kagura's followers to kill him. Izanagi's soul was free and which he met countless of hollows. He also met Jikimaru, the very same person who was like a brother, bestfriend and father to him. Jikimaru turned out to be Captain aswell during the time. Infact he was the captain of Squad three and he once again, adopted the pure at heart, ruff around the edges but a diamond boy, Izanagi once more. Personally trained him to right shinigami levels unimaginable. Jikimaru, who is still alive today rather stay in hiding. He dwells in his gigai on the places of the world of the living in which people or other worldly beings wouldn't even think or bother coming too instead of Izanagi. Leaving his position of captain to Izanagi for the time being. Izanagi left to follow the ways of Jikimaru. PersonalityIzanagi is a calm and moderately great guy. He loves his family even though he believes his mother is a lying and cheating *****. His father is dying because of a virus she spreaded to him, something of which is the cause of Mangesu Hozuki's death but it's internal which gives Izanagi a terrible feeling seeing as his father was a great man, being one of the best ninja in the village and he was very proud of it. Too his mother, he hates her guts, yet love her for bringing him into this world SO he can hate her guts for destroying the family. To his Brother and other two siblings, He is sweet and kind, a loving relative, taking on the role of sibling and mother(in a sense of taking care of his siblings when their sick and such.). His littler Siblings, He train them along with brother, in a kind and gentle fashion. His brother who is in the same age range as himself, Susanoo, he acts as a older brother type mentor, who trains with him the most. They have a really nice relationship, tight brotherly bond between them. His step family, He feels like his step brother is another member in the brotherly bond group. His step mother although seems to be quite rude and annoying in many ways. As you can see, Izanagi has a quite multi persona for multiple different people in his life, but to complete strangers he is kind and welcoming, sweet and funny, putting other's needs before him all the time. To the elderly and high ranking, he has much respect and wish to become great like them.Just like the Nara male clansmen, he is just as lazy, hating to do stuff if he doesn't really want to or have too. Izanagi is annoyed with Arrogant people, Stupid and too playful people that don't act appropriately for their age. Weak opponents who talk big but in the end, falls to the ground, begging for mercy after a anti-climatic loss. Those are just the basic annoyances, others are people getting in his way and interrupting him while he's doing something. When someone doesn't answer him when he speaks. Some of his fears are thoughts of his parent's and siblings dying along with the rest of his family. Never having the chance or ability to learn new abilities and powers seeing as he is unknown to the other secrets his clan holds. Only person he knows of that knows the history of his clan is his father. Techniques (Optional, but good to have)Shadow/Darkness Muniplation - During his time of being alive. He did not master one half of his kekkei genkai which was elemental muniplation but he mastered the other half. He was half nara. He focused most of his training on his nara half to the point for full mastery. He muniplate shadows to a keep point of flicking a body part to have a shadow do a specific thing. Sadly Izanagi gets ill from the curse on his left arm. Particularly on his left hand in the form of fire but the color is black. THis happened when he was alive, he entered the shadow realm through his nara half during training. In which to show everyone that he entered the shadow realm, his left arm is marked with it. His shadow muniplation is the best when the sun is out but at night, when it's completely pitch, jet black. It's best to get to the nearest source of light.(Weakness is Light.) He can merge was his own shadow for escaping but doesn't work while in mid air. He can also muniplate his own shadow aswell. Zanpaktou InformationZanpaktou Name: Shinrabanshou(Universe.) Zanpakutou AppearenceNone, For his zanpaktou resides within his body. He seals his Zanpaktou within himself. That way he doesn't have to draw his sword during a fight. Shikai Appearence:His Zanpaktou changes the look of Izanagi in appearance. Shikai Ability:Unrevealed. Bankai Appearence:Not Yet Revealed. Bankai Ability:
Not Yet Revealed.
Zanpaktou Release Phrase: "Luminate." KidoNone. Role-play Sample: Click for Rp Sample.
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| | | Ryuunosuke Second Squad Third Seat
| Subject: Re: Flames from the Shadow Realm, Arise! Sun Mar 21, 2010 10:32 pm | |
| IF I am honest. I think that you will be able to Godmod too heavily with your shikai ability. Shinigami already have high speed thanks to shunpo so you don't need that. Also why do you need it if you have teleportation? Teleportation in my opinion is a big no-no as it basically makes you impossible to hit. High speed regeneration is really more of an arrancar/vizard ability. You can have regeneration, but I am not going to let you have like Ulquiorra regeneration. Also you have not stated in what way you can manipulate crystal. I mean can you make it appear out of nowhere or do you need crystal to manipulate. Basically, are you a crystalbender like a guy from Avatar or a crystal user like that woman from Naruto. Also you kind of confuse me with your shikai. You say the 13 swords act as protection and move of their own will, but then you say you can make them appear in your hand. So are they always there and you can like teleport them to your hand or do they appear to defend you of your own will. Also what do the 13 swords look like. In summary: Remove intense speed, Tone down high speed regeneration, remove teleporation, describe swords, describe crystal manipulation, explain if the swords are there all the time or not. When you've done that and your rp sample i will check this again. | |
| | | Ezekeil Admin
| Subject: Re: Flames from the Shadow Realm, Arise! Mon Mar 22, 2010 12:38 am | |
| Your shi kai is just pure OP, change it or limit it and when people have the "not revealed" part on the bankai, it, to me means you do not have a bankai, simple. If you do not post your bankai and leave it as "unreaveled" you do not have one, simple.
Your shikai is beyond excessive, it'd be almost impossible to kill you. Its denied, so change it to what ryu has considered; description is vital. Heres a tip, build some shi kai techniques.
Happy Hunting | |
| | | Ryuunosuke Second Squad Third Seat
| Subject: Re: Flames from the Shadow Realm, Arise! Mon Mar 22, 2010 12:40 am | |
| Thank you for your support Ezekial. | |
| | | Legacy
| Subject: Re: Flames from the Shadow Realm, Arise! Mon Mar 22, 2010 12:52 am | |
| Its fine, I'm Changing this character To either taking Aizen back or creating a new character so don't worry yourselves about this app anymore. In fact you can delete it. | |
| | | Kami
| Subject: Re: Flames from the Shadow Realm, Arise! Mon Mar 22, 2010 2:12 am | |
| Nevermind, Don't delete it, I will just Re-do it. | |
| | | Kami
| Subject: Re: Flames from the Shadow Realm, Arise! Mon Mar 22, 2010 3:16 am | |
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| | | Ezekeil Admin
| Subject: Re: Flames from the Shadow Realm, Arise! Sat Mar 27, 2010 3:24 pm | |
| It still doesn't make sense. What can he do with the shadow, can he make little bubbles? Can he walk on shadows, he can he go through them and how often can he do it? Cool downs please.
Did you know lightning produces LIGHT = weakness of your shadow, so meaning to say, you can't use both techniques as same time and PLEASE produce a more meaningful description on your techs.
Your techniques come from your shikai and bankai so you have to state what it does, your shi kai and bankai, no "not revealed" shit. | |
| | | Legacy
| Subject: Re: Flames from the Shadow Realm, Arise! Sun Mar 28, 2010 12:09 am | |
| @First Statement, He can muniplate his shadow, If He muniplates every shadow it would be overpowered. He can bring his shadow to the real world just as he can enter the shadow realm seeing as his shadow is an alternate version of himself, it's still Izanagi. He can't create shadow bubbles, but he can use his shadow to possess the shadow of fallen and dead beings and his shadow can become that dead person. The person is still dead but the shadow controls it's movements, speech and thought and power. Killing the shadow by shining a light source on it wont kill the real Izanagi but leave him a bit at a disadvantage. Izanagi fights 110% at night because he has shadow/darkness muniplation. Killing Izanagi wont kill his Shadow but the shadow will either go back to the shadow realm or inhabit the body of the dead Izanagi. @Second Statement, No, That's stupid, why would I use Shadows and Lightning at the same time. Why would I have Lightning and shadows as my powers without a back-up or a good reason? His left arm is branded by the flames of the shadow realm so any energy produced through that arm is shadow energy(Ex:Shadow Fire, Lightning, Plasma.) In this case, Izanagi can produce black, dark lightning out his left arm. If I produce a more meaningful description some of my combinations and plans on using them will be revealed D:. @Third Statement, I know that, I was going to ask people for suggestions on my Bankai and Shikai later once I know everything else on the application was alright. | |
| | | Legacy
| Subject: Re: Flames from the Shadow Realm, Arise! Sun Mar 28, 2010 12:21 am | |
| - Quote :
- when people have the "not revealed" part on the bankai, it, to me means you do not have a bankai, simple. If you do not post your bankai and leave it as "unreaveled" you do not have one, simple.
I understand what you're saying about that. You must understand that thats your opinion about the "Unrevealed." Topic. Not everyone feels the same way, because I believe if they didn't. It would be smarter to put None, Because I plan on revealing mine through Rp to the public. I drop hints through my Techniques of what it will be. It doesn't mean you have one, it could mean you have one that you have seen for yourself only through training but don't want others to know. It could mean you will have one but indecisive of what you want. It's pretty mean to just assume that someone puts "Not Revealed." or "Unrevealed." That they don't have one. | |
| | | Kami
| Subject: Re: Flames from the Shadow Realm, Arise! Sun Apr 04, 2010 7:37 am | |
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| Subject: Re: Flames from the Shadow Realm, Arise! Sun Apr 11, 2010 3:43 pm | |
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